The place where everyone hangs out, chats, gossips, and argues
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By MK Chris
#128063
If, moron, you read what I had written correctly you would see I used the word "own" in its to have control over form rather than to possess.
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By Gigglyboots
#128066
Whats with the new attitude Topher? It's amusing to read how McQueen winds you all up with little effort.

Welcome back ASG...
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By Mcqueen_
#128067
I did read it. One day you too will have your own chatroom. Must just be me then that thinks having your own chatroom means possesing it.

So use to you coming out with shit though.
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By MK Chris
#128070
Topher wrote:One day I too will have my own chatroom...


Mcqueen wrote:One day you too will have your own chatroom


aw can you make my dreams come true?
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By Mcqueen_
#128074
If, moron, you read what I had written correctly you would see I said "One day you too will have your own chatroom", to state what I had read, not stating I think you will have your own chatroom.
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By MK Chris
#128077
You know I am a moron actually. I dont drink tea or coffee or nothing.

could be worse.. i could come from leicester.
http://www.ananova.com/news/story/sm_837793.html
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By Adam
#128081
Kids - stop. Kiss and make up and stop aguring over things. Please?

[Back on topic]

Lindsay, What did you say in the end? Are you happy with it? Feel free to post on here if you want :)

[/Back on Topic]
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By Sidders
#128082
Boring, boring Leicester was chanted at City matches after Arsene Wenger said we 'played for penalties'. We won the cup that season. If that's what boring means then bore me up.
By Dopey
#128086
more like boring, boring thread.
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By Gaspode_The_Wonder_Dog
#128096
Gigglyboots wrote:Whats with the new attitude Topher?

yeah, its like a new person. used to be such a nice boy...
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By MK Chris
#128106
Yeah I must have been bitten by a rabid dog.
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By ~JACQUI~
#128120
wouldnt surprise me...........
By Lindsay
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I am currently in my last year of school and have thoroughly enjoyed my time here; however I am looking forward to studying Business Studies at university. My choice of degree has been carefully selected as a result of my preferred school subjects. In my time at school I have taken a wide range of subjects, with my favourites being Business Management and Psychology, which I also hope to incorporate along with Business Studies.

I am very interested in business and all the different areas which are associated with the subject. I have taken Psychology this year and have found the subject extremely interesting and enjoyable. Psychology along with business studies would be an advantage as they link together very well, especially in areas such as human resources and marketing.

During my weeks’ work experience at a local Primary School I learned a great deal about a working environment and my self confidence was boosted. Although the work was not related to business studies, I gained useful practical experience in my core skills, communication (mostly in person to other teachers and also to the whole class), information technology (using the computer to look at children’s records and also preparing work for the class), numeracy (being shown how to work out a budget within the classroom and how much each class had to spend on resources,) problem solving (having to arrange the whole class for a day, what they were doing and organise the work for them) and working with other people as part of a team. I particularly enjoyed my time there as I learnt what it is like in a working as part of a team and also individually, and also my core skills greatly improved. This experience will benefit me both in my studies and also my chosen career path.

I work weekends and holidays in the restaurant of a country clothes and food shop. This has been good experience for me as I have to deal with many people and work as part of a team. My confidence and interpersonal skills have greatly improved as I deal with customers all the time and have to interact with everyone to make sure everything is done and on time. This job although not related to the course I am applying for, has helped my communication skills and I particularly enjoy working there as the staff are really friendly and there is a good team atmosphere. I also enjoy meeting new people and dealing with the public in general.

This year at school has been particularly beneficial to me as by being in sixth year you hold more responsibilities. I am a Buddy to a first year class, this involves being in the Registration class with them, chatting to all the children and be there for them if they have any problems or worries. I also do SSP which is the School Service Programme. This involves organising events such as discos, the Christmas dance, the sixth year yearbook and video and raising money for our chosen charity by this year organising a charity auction of goods and promises.

I get on very well with people my own age and have made some very good friends at school. I consider myself to be reliable, responsible and a very organised person. I feel these are essential qualities to have in the field of business.

I have always had a keen interest in the area of business studies as my grandmother was an accountant and my mother has her own hairdressing business. By studying this subject along with psychology at university I hope to further my knowledge and I am greatly looking forward to building on my existing experiences of studying business in secondary school.


teacher seemed to think it was ok
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By Adam
#128191
Read that some other time.
By stevotrash
#128196
I also do SSP which is the School Service Programme. This involves organising events such as discos, the Christmas dance, the sixth year yearbook and video and raising money for our chosen charity by this year organising a charity auction of goods and promises.


Ha ha, your lisa simpson.

Lets face it, you knew what you were going to write for your personal statement. No-one would have come to the chris moyles.net website to seek career's advice given the amount frustrated loosers and under age pregnant mothers that frequent here.

You were just trying to show off wern't you? Oh look at me, i've got more hope than you stevo, uglybob, etc, oh look at me i've got so much to write about myself I don't know how to condense it down into a 10,000 word dissertation.

My heart * bleeds
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By kendra k
#128211
i guess that is a new low- newbies coming here to bolster their egos. will they think of us when they're making 6-figure salaries and we're still living with our parents?
By stevotrash
#128227
or when they're making six figure salaries and living with our parents
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By Ahh_Pathetic
#128241
I have a six figure salary its just the first 3 figures are zero.
By Lindsay
#128277
scuse me but i didnt know what to write some people actually helped me write some of that

why would i show off, i posted that cos someone asked if i wanted to

i am not new on this site, yes i may not have many posts but i have been reading posts and looking at this site for about a year

maybe i shouldnt have asked for anyones help and dont intend to again
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By ASG
#128279
Don't worry about them, I used to post all kinds of rubbish and they all still love me! [Dodges flying rock]
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By Spoon
#128280
Don't listen to them Lindsay, well, more accurately, don't read them.

The problem I thought with your personal statement was in two parts sounded a bit negative.
You said "Although the work was not related to business studies" and "This job although not related to the course I am applying for".
From my experience with personal statements and CVs (both my own and ones I have reviewed for my company) I've realised some people see this way of speaking as excuse writing. ie "I've done this but don't worry because this and this..."

What might be better would be instead of "Although the work was not related to business studies, I gained useful practical experience in my core skills, " try:
"Through my work I have gained practical experience in my core skills, "

and instead of:
"This job although not related to the course I am applying for, has helped my communication skills and I particularly enjoy working there as the staff are really friendly and there is a good team atmosphere. "

try
"This job has helped improve my communication skills and I have found I particularly enjoy working in the friendly team atmosphere."

Obviously these are only suggestions so make what you want of them. Good luck with university. Don't drink too little!
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By kendra k
#128282
couldn't this have been done over pms, so all of you arrogant middle class kids can help eachother?

xoxo
kendrak who's tired of feeling like crap because of prententious brats
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By Sidders
#128286
Unfortunately PM's aren't communal.
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By kendra k
#128289
but PMs can target interested parties. the sign of true gentleman/gentlewoman is knowing when to hold back.
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By Sidders
#128291
But how do you know who's interested unless you post first?
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