[S4B]

I guess - *Dubiously*

[Sunny So Cal]

It looks pretty creative to me!

[S4B]

What is more creative is the link at the bottom of GBMs sig! Now that made me laugh my head off, maybe it should be compulsory viewing for all newbies!

[Boboff]

Consoles story was spread out across the page which made it impossible ( couldn't be asrsed ) to read, couldn't "contain" it !

Ralf and Sarah off to Egypt then.

Newbie post was good.

I am not sure on Poetry it's very nice and all bit very personal.

I am not sure what to say other than,
"to obtain happiness in life you only need to achieve one thing, contentment with it."
"And how the fucj am I meant to do that then ?"

[MK Chris]

Consoles story was spread out across the page which made it impossible ( couldn't be asrsed ) to read, couldn't "contain" it !

You could have pasted it into Word, or Wordpad/Notepad with word wrapping turned on. No horizontal scrolling required then.

I thought the story was good, but should have been contained in something bigger, I wanted to read on.

[Vivienne]

I wanted to read on too. I liked it a lot.

[Yudster]

Well, I haven't read it but the key to successful writing is making people want to keep reading, so it sounds like Console has cracked it. Of course its good to make them want to start reading too.

[Console]

I thought the story was good, but should have been contained in something bigger, I wanted to read on.

I wanted to read on too. I liked it a lot.

Well, always leave them wanting more; or I suppose I could write a sequel or something.

[Vivienne]

[quote="Console"][
Well, always leave them wanting more.quote] It's not often that you do that tho'... tee hee!

[S4B]

And Viv please tell us how you know this?! Actually on second thoughts I'm not sure I want to know

[Vivienne]

Intuition!

[Yudster]

Thank goodness for that.....!